You are studying at university and one of your lecturers has asked his students to write and suggest ways in which he could improve his teaching.
Write an email to the lecturer. Say the way you enjoy about his lectures and suggest how they could be improved.
Dear Professor Byron,
Last week you asked students to write and give you feedback on your lectures. Therefore, I have outlined my thoughts below.
In general, I find your lectures very informative and inspiring. Indeed, I particularly like the way you demonstrate complex issues with the use of simple drawings. This makes your lessons both interesting and memorable. However, I do feel that you could provide us with more handouts, as I often don’t have time to take down all the important points. I would also like to see more discussion work, as I find this method the most suitable way to clarify and deepen my understanding of the subject content.
I’d like to thank you for the interest you are taking in your students and look forward to your next lecture.
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1、I am writing the letter to propose some conducive recommendations to you as regards your major.我写这封信是为了关于你的专业提出一些有用的建议。
2、I hope you find these proposals useful.我希望您发现这些建议有用。
3、I trust you will take my suggestions into account.我相信您会考虑我的建议。