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考研英语小作文预测范文1:建议信

来源:新东方王江涛  时间:2016-12-22 20:36:25

Directions:

    You are studying at university and one of your lecturers has asked his students to write and suggest ways in which he could improve his teaching.

    Write an email to the lecturer. Say the way you enjoy about his lectures and suggest how they could be improved.

Dear Professor Byron,

Last week you asked students to write and give you feedback on your lectures. Therefore, I have outlined my thoughts below.

In general, I find your lectures very informative and inspiring. Indeed, I particularly like the way you demonstrate complex issues with the use of simple drawings. This makes your lessons both interesting and memorable. However, I do feel that you could provide us with more handouts, as I often don’t have time to take down all the important points. I would also like to see more discussion work, as I find this method the most suitable way to clarify and deepen my understanding of the subject content.

I’d like to thank you for the interest you are taking in your students and look forward to your next lecture.

                                                       Yours sincerely,

                                                       Li Ming

参考译文

尊敬的拜伦教授:

上周您要求学生写信告诉您关于您课程的反馈。因此,我已列明我的想法如下。

总而言之,我发现您的课程信息量大、令人鼓舞。事实上,我非常喜欢您使用简单图画来阐明复杂问题的方式。这使得您的课程既有趣又令人印象深刻。然而,由于我经常没时间记下所有的要点,我确实感到您能给我们提供更多的印刷讲义。由于我发现课堂讨论是澄清和加深我对课程内容理解的最佳方式,因此我想有更多的课堂讨论。

非常感谢您对学生的关注,期待您的下次课程。

                                                    您真诚的,

                                                    李明

亮点词汇

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道长点评

    建议信首段应表明写作意图,简要介绍自己,注意语气,切勿罗嗦。次段应针对情况提出具体建议或忠告,应首先肯定优点,再写需要改进,否则对方以为是投诉而非建。尾段应总结建议,注意礼貌原则。建议信很容易写成议论文,应时刻考虑读者感受,给对方提建议时经常提到I和you。

佳句拓展

1、I am writing the letter to propose some conducive recommendations to you as regards your major.我写这封信是为了关于你的专业提出一些有用的建议。

2、I hope you find these proposals useful.我希望您发现这些建议有用。

3、I trust you will take my suggestions into account.我相信您会考虑我的建议。

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